Horse Drawn Equipment Edit This Paragraph Please... Is It Okay?

Edit this paragraph please... Is it okay? - horse drawn equipment

This is a paragraph of my brochure about moving to Canada West (for the history ... 1880). He tries to convince, persuade the people there. This paragraph is there about job opportunities.

The move to Western Canada may be an advantage for women and men. More and more women are also here, in domestic service, while men tend to be farmers. Prairie Pioneers team of horses with the steam engine at work. The monthly wage for civil servants usually between $ 10 and $ 25. For chefs, the payment is 12 to 25 $ per month. For housewives, is between $ 30 and $ 40 per month. The daily working time is 12 hours, from 6 or 7 clock and ends at 6 or 7pm. Some jobs are available include the sale and servicing of machinery. You may be in a store that serves the neighborhood families.

Does that make sense? People would persuayed?
So please correct all errors of grammar or punctuation!
anything!

thank you very much:)